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I remember angry words
And harsh surprises
Putting up a guard
Instead of breaking down
And I remember
Losing my best friend

I remember the sound
And looking up
Seeing that message
That word that broke my heart
And I remember
Losing my best friend

I remember what you said
And what I did
Both of us stubborn
Defensive and pissed
And I remember
Losing my best friend

I remember talking after
And saying we both care
Talking pretty words
But not doing pretty things
And I remember
Losing my best friend

I remember being friends
And thinking it was over
But things arenít always what they seem
It was never quite the same
And I remember
Losing my best friend

September 25
Like it was yesterday
It al crumbled from there
I guess we werenít as strong as we thought
And I remember
Losing you
hmm.....I suppose my Explanation needs an Explanation. hehe. well anyways, last year I was best friends with this girl and this year we don't talk at all. People always ask me what happened between us and I guess I wrote this to kinda explain. I know it's kinda vauge, but I tried....Tell me what you think please!
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:iconbrennanchan:
i like it alot.
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:iconmygateisdown:
A FRIEND OF MINE!?!?!?! I can't believe you are that cold! Lordy-O! Yeah, but it's good stuff. One thing I would work on if your goal is just "lyrics" lyrics would be to have a buildup and a climax, for sort of an "impact" point where the emotion is heavily concentrated (which is great in music, but iffy for poetry, so great job if you were going for more poetry that lyrics). And... yeah. That's all I got.
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:iconlost-in-you:
How is "a friend of mine" cold? haha. anyways, Thanx for the comment. :D :hug: loves
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:iconmygateisdown:
Like I don't have a name!?!?! I mean if you said "my bestest buddy" or "the coolest guy in the world" or "my lord and eternal master" I would be fine, but NOOOOO, I'm SOME FRIEND!!!!!!! Yeah, just saying...
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:iconlost-in-you:
YOU PHSYCO!!!!!!!! blah..........:D
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:iconsimpleplanmaniac:
That's such a great song. It's a song, right? I would love to make a picture to go with this ^^
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:iconlost-in-you:
yeah. A friend of mine writes music and he asked me for some lyrics so I thought I'd make an attempt at a song. And I would be honored (once again) if you made a picture :D
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